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02-11-2006, 08:24 PM | #1 |
Apocalyptic Poster
Location: Chicago
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What do you think of this layout??
I decided to make a web site to put my work on. this is really early and none of the stuff goes anywhere. What do you think of it?
oh wait heres the site... www.scottmschultz.com |
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02-11-2006, 09:07 PM | #2 |
Sometimes, though.
Location: Hazard, California
Posts: 21,273
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change fps to something higher and make the animations smoother. Use something other than Arial Bold, come up with a better color scheme, come up with a better logo for yourself, come up with a better introduction and make your stage larger...it's too small nobody uses 640x480 resolution anymore.
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02-11-2006, 09:08 PM | #3 |
Sometimes, though.
Location: Hazard, California
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Also you cut the first 2 or 3 pts of your name off the top, it's too noticeable.
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02-11-2006, 09:23 PM | #4 |
Braindead
Location: Le look de Corgan
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too flashy.
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02-11-2006, 09:24 PM | #5 |
Rambling on
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needs nudity
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02-11-2006, 09:25 PM | #6 |
Immortal
Location: helllllloooooo!!
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I would liek some blue and tan touches in there instead of the black
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02-11-2006, 09:40 PM | #7 |
Rambling on
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maybe we should just take the guy out, no?
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02-12-2006, 04:40 AM | #8 |
Apocalyptic Poster
Location: Chicago
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ok i updated it again, tell me what you think. This is my first try at flash BTW...
www.scottmschultz.com |
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02-12-2006, 09:52 AM | #9 |
die 'til it doesn't hurt
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not bad.....but nothing really mindblowing.
for its purposes (posting your resume and portfolio, i assume) it will do, i'm sure. are you going to post your portfolio any time soon? |
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02-12-2006, 12:37 PM | #10 | |
Apocalyptic Poster
Location: Chicago
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that might take a little while.... |
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02-12-2006, 12:44 PM | #11 |
Netphoria's George Will
Location: Fenway Park
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The flash menu words are annoying (and we can add pointless) as fuck.
The font your name is displayed in is plain and unimaginative. The colors you chose contrast each other and make me not want to even look at your work, because if the entry page is this bad your work can't be much better. |
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02-12-2006, 01:21 PM | #12 | |
Apocalyptic Poster
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show me some good flash pages |
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02-12-2006, 01:24 PM | #13 | |
Pledge
Location: Underneath Your Bed
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02-12-2006, 01:31 PM | #14 | |
Netphoria's George Will
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02-12-2006, 02:07 PM | #15 |
yer mom
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why are the colour boxes different sizes?
the text folding out is awkward |
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