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Old 02-11-2006, 08:24 PM   #1
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Default What do you think of this layout??

I decided to make a web site to put my work on. this is really early and none of the stuff goes anywhere. What do you think of it?

oh wait heres the site...
www.scottmschultz.com

 
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Old 02-11-2006, 09:07 PM   #2
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change fps to something higher and make the animations smoother. Use something other than Arial Bold, come up with a better color scheme, come up with a better logo for yourself, come up with a better introduction and make your stage larger...it's too small nobody uses 640x480 resolution anymore.

 
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Old 02-11-2006, 09:08 PM   #3
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Also you cut the first 2 or 3 pts of your name off the top, it's too noticeable.

 
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Old 02-11-2006, 09:23 PM   #4
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too flashy.

 
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Old 02-11-2006, 09:24 PM   #5
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needs nudity

 
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Old 02-11-2006, 09:25 PM   #6
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I would liek some blue and tan touches in there instead of the black

 
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Old 02-11-2006, 09:40 PM   #7
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maybe we should just take the guy out, no?

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 04:40 AM   #8
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ok i updated it again, tell me what you think. This is my first try at flash BTW...


www.scottmschultz.com

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 09:52 AM   #9
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not bad.....but nothing really mindblowing.

for its purposes (posting your resume and portfolio, i assume) it will do, i'm sure.

are you going to post your portfolio any time soon?

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 12:37 PM   #10
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not bad.....but nothing really mindblowing.

for its purposes (posting your resume and portfolio, i assume) it will do, i'm sure.

are you going to post your portfolio any time soon?

that might take a little while....

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 12:44 PM   #11
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The flash menu words are annoying (and we can add pointless) as fuck.

The font your name is displayed in is plain and unimaginative. The colors you chose contrast each other and make me not want to even look at your work, because if the entry page is this bad your work can't be much better.

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 01:21 PM   #12
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The flash menu words are annoying (and we can add pointless) as fuck.

The font your name is displayed in is plain and unimaginative. The colors you chose contrast each other and make me not want to even look at your work, because if the entry page is this bad your work can't be much better.

show me some good flash pages

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 01:24 PM   #13
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ok i updated it again, tell me what you think. This is my first try at flash BTW...


www.scottmschultz.com
It probably the colors, but it looks kind of fruity

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 01:31 PM   #14
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show me some good flash pages
I don't know any off the top of my head - I think flash should not be done unless you know how to make it work flawlessly.

 
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Old 02-12-2006, 02:07 PM   #15
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why are the colour boxes different sizes?
the text folding out is awkward

 
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