Critique wanted for new song...

[The machine of god]

Looking for critics of a song I wrote tonite. Go to http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSnYVm2ZmE

Its called "Not For You". It was recorded with a computer mic so I realise the production is a bit weak, the vox are quite low in the mix - its a demo but good enough to get the idea across!
Please post any comments (good or bad!) in this thread.

- Neill

[ChristHimself!]

Originally posted by The machine of god

Its called "Not For You". It was recorded with a computer mic so I realise the production is a bit weak, the vox are quite low in the mix - its a demo but good enough to get the idea across!
Please post any comments (good or bad!) in this thread.

Is that you singing? I like the vocals, nice voice, although they are a bit low in the mix...

I enjoyed the song, it would be better a bit more layered, possibly with a little more effects but I think it sounds pretty nice... it evolves quite well.

now try the stuff on the downloads page Http://www.briansdontrun.com

[The machine of god]

Yeah its me singing. Its very much a demo quality recording. Any comments from others?

- Neill