A Retrospective Author

jenga66 · 12:49 AM

About three years ago my bored 20 year old self went out and bought an eight track. Since then, I haven't recorded a damn thing. Now I look back and wonder if these songs were any good at all. Personally, I'm proud of what I've done but I wouldn't mind getting some recent critique to get me going since I'm starting a new band in Pittsburgh.

And if it's at all possible (being Netphoria and all), I'd like to stray away from stupid immature potty humor. If you want to say it sucks, that's fine, but please don't tell me to shoot monkey's out my ass or anything.

myspace.com/garbanzermusic

celluloid_love · 09-21-2007, 01:03 AM

well the melodies are pretty good but i think on that third track you should shoot some more monkeys out your ass

Dr. Phil · 09-21-2007, 01:25 AM

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Originally Posted by celluloid_love

well the melodies are pretty good but i think on that third track you should shoot some more monkeys out your ass

Stop ruining my boarding experience.

BumbleBeeMouth · 09-21-2007, 05:14 AM

argh, bad electro drum beats! Its a little bit sex music, and its been done, but a pretty worthy effort there. I admit i only listened to two, but goodnight was quite nice, sounds like the underwater levels in mario 64 mixed with ill be watching you.

09-20-2007, 11:54 PM	#1
jenga66 Demi-God Posts: 352	What do you think of my old songs? About three years ago my bored 20 year old self went out and bought an eight track. Since then, I haven't recorded a damn thing. Now I look back and wonder if these songs were any good at all. Personally, I'm proud of what I've done but I wouldn't mind getting some recent critique to get me going since I'm starting a new band in Pittsburgh. And if it's at all possible (being Netphoria and all), I'd like to stray away from stupid immature potty humor. If you want to say it sucks, that's fine, but please don't tell me to shoot monkey's out my ass or anything. myspace.com/garbanzermusic Last edited by jenga66 : 09-21-2007 at 12:49 AM. Reason: title too confusing

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09-21-2007, 01:03 AM	#2
celluloid_love Minion of Satan Location: creepyu Posts: 7,230	well the melodies are pretty good but i think on that third track you should shoot some more monkeys out your ass

09-21-2007, 05:14 AM	#4
BumbleBeeMouth Apocalyptic Poster Location: assertive, tattooed and tough, dangerous, etc, Posts: 4,343	argh, bad electro drum beats! Its a little bit sex music, and its been done, but a pretty worthy effort there. I admit i only listened to two, but goodnight was quite nice, sounds like the underwater levels in mario 64 mixed with ill be watching you.