BC: Message I

+Tristessa+ · 12-10-2006, 07:32 AM

I can write the saddest poem of all tonight.
I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too.

On nights like this, I held her in my arms.
I kissed her so many times under the infinite sky.
How could I not have loved her large, still eyes?

I can write the saddest poem of all tonight.
To think I don't have her. To feel that I've lost her.
To hear the immense night, more immense without her.

And the poem falls to the soul as dew to grass.
What does it matter that my love couldn't keep her.
The night is full of stars and she is not with me.

That's all. Far away, someone sings. Far away.
My soul is lost without her.

As if to bring her near, my eyes search for her.
My heart searches for her and she is not with me.

The same night that whitens the same trees.
We, we who were, we are the same no longer.
I no longer love her, true, but how much I loved her.
My voice searched the wind to touch her ear.

Her voice, her light body. Her infinite eyes.
I no longer love her, true, but perhaps I love her.
Love is so short and forgetting so long.
Because on nights like this I held her in my arms,
my soul is lost without her.
Although this may be the last pain she causes me,
and this may be the last poem I write for her.

xo

The New · 07:55 AM

Kahlo · 12-10-2006, 07:43 AM

Teh B0lly!!!

sometimesidie · 12-10-2006, 08:43 AM

nothing is ever lost

Kahlo · 12-10-2006, 08:46 AM

Tonight tonight.
Infinite Sadness
A night like this
In the arms of Ruby

Steve Holt · 12-10-2006, 09:10 AM

http://pubpages.unh.edu/~cmesser/ima...hoopdeedoo.gif

The Melty Man · 12-10-2006, 10:00 AM

Nice poem.

ryoga · 12-10-2006, 04:00 PM

Nice poem, but there is a part in it that kinda confuses me. How can your soul be lost over a person you no longer love or love “less”? If you truly loved a person you wouldn’t stop loving them…the relationship may change shape but the love is always there.

Cherub Angel · 12-10-2006, 04:22 PM

where is this from?

redbull · 12-10-2006, 04:33 PM

quick, someone post all the tristan + tristessa posts

Foster · 12-10-2006, 05:01 PM

Is Neruda...

ryoga · 12-10-2006, 05:12 PM

Really? I've never read this one from him before...I like it.

fluxequalsrad · 12-10-2006, 05:15 PM

its god awful. you say 'soul is lost' which is an immediate error and then you talk say 'poem' about a million times. Makes me want to hurl.

Thomas · 12-10-2006, 08:35 PM

Nice poem...

We should do a "sp haiku contest" lol

killtrocity · 12-10-2006, 08:51 PM

Like the moon over
day, my genius and brawn are
wasted on these fools. ~ haiku

ZWANPHONY · 12-10-2006, 09:06 PM

a friend had this in his away message once.

haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator

and my brother gimmegimmenothin wrote this:

billy corgan rocks
he has a bald head up top
and his hand is red

12-10-2006, 07:32 AM	#1
+Tristessa+ Oblivious Virgin Posts: 37	BC: Message I I can write the saddest poem of all tonight. I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too. On nights like this, I held her in my arms. I kissed her so many times under the infinite sky. How could I not have loved her large, still eyes? I can write the saddest poem of all tonight. To think I don't have her. To feel that I've lost her. To hear the immense night, more immense without her. And the poem falls to the soul as dew to grass. What does it matter that my love couldn't keep her. The night is full of stars and she is not with me. That's all. Far away, someone sings. Far away. My soul is lost without her. As if to bring her near, my eyes search for her. My heart searches for her and she is not with me. The same night that whitens the same trees. We, we who were, we are the same no longer. I no longer love her, true, but how much I loved her. My voice searched the wind to touch her ear. Her voice, her light body. Her infinite eyes. I no longer love her, true, but perhaps I love her. Love is so short and forgetting so long. Because on nights like this I held her in my arms, my soul is lost without her. Although this may be the last pain she causes me, and this may be the last poem I write for her. xo

12-10-2006, 07:41 AM	#2
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12-10-2006, 09:10 AM	#6
Steve Holt Demi-God Location: I'm Darth Nihilus Posts: 469	i'm so retro http://pubpages.unh.edu/~cmesser/ima...hoopdeedoo.gif

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12-10-2006, 07:43 AM	#3
Kahlo Registered User Posts: 17,539	Teh B0lly!!!

12-10-2006, 08:43 AM	#4
sometimesidie Amish Rake Fighter Posts: 3	nothing is ever lost

12-10-2006, 08:46 AM	#5
Kahlo Registered User Posts: 17,539	Tonight tonight. Infinite Sadness A night like this In the arms of Ruby

12-10-2006, 10:00 AM	#7
The Melty Man Ownz Posts: 855	Nice poem.

12-10-2006, 04:00 PM	#8
ryoga Ownz Posts: 579	Nice poem, but there is a part in it that kinda confuses me. How can your soul be lost over a person you no longer love or love “less”? If you truly loved a person you wouldn’t stop loving them…the relationship may change shape but the love is always there.

12-10-2006, 04:22 PM	#9
Cherub Angel Apocalyptic Poster Location: nowhere, IL Posts: 2,466	where is this from?

12-10-2006, 04:33 PM	#10
redbull Immortal Location: like liutenant dan i'm rollin' Posts: 21,016	quick, someone post all the tristan + tristessa posts

12-10-2006, 05:01 PM	#11
Foster Amish Rake Fighter Posts: 1	Is Neruda...

12-10-2006, 05:12 PM	#12
ryoga Ownz Posts: 579	Really? I've never read this one from him before...I like it.

12-10-2006, 05:15 PM	#13
fluxequalsrad Apocalyptic Poster Posts: 4,275	its god awful. you say 'soul is lost' which is an immediate error and then you talk say 'poem' about a million times. Makes me want to hurl.

12-10-2006, 08:35 PM	#14
Thomas Demi-God Posts: 428	Nice poem... We should do a "sp haiku contest" lol

12-10-2006, 08:51 PM	#15
killtrocity Saturday Night Goth Location: POLLOS Posts: 9,207	Like the moon over day, my genius and brawn are wasted on these fools. ~ haiku

12-10-2006, 09:06 PM	#16
ZWANPHONY Apocalyptic Poster Location: SC USA Posts: 1,350	a friend had this in his away message once. haikus are easy but sometimes they don't make sense refrigerator and my brother gimmegimmenothin wrote this: billy corgan rocks he has a bald head up top and his hand is red