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Old 10-03-2015, 12:15 PM   #1
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Default "I see her face in passing cars / I see her face in burnt out stars"

I see her face in passing cars
I see her face in burnt out stars
I see her face in the bombed out bars of Gainesville

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discuss great unused billy lines

 
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Old 10-03-2015, 04:00 PM   #2
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once in a lifetime

 
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Old 10-03-2015, 04:39 PM   #3
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To Billy's credit, in SP1 he had a great record of editing and improving lyrics as songs developed.

 
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Old 10-03-2015, 05:36 PM   #4
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I see her face in passing cars
I see her face in burnt out stars
I see her face in the bombed out bars of Gainesville

"passing cars" made it into My Life and Times, other than that I can't think of anything that might have come from this draft.

 
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Old 10-03-2015, 05:49 PM   #5
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I don't think those three lines are paricularly bad

 
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Old 10-03-2015, 05:50 PM   #6
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passing cars/burnt out stars is an awesome rhyme

 
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Old 10-03-2015, 06:30 PM   #7
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"passing cars" made it into My Life and Times, other than that I can't think of anything that might have come from this draft.
same cadence/themes used in those live versions when porcelina would go into bury me and later used in transmission improvs

 
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Old 10-04-2015, 04:08 AM   #8
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not enough "C'mon c'mon 'cmon yeah yeah yeah".
what shitty lyrics.

 
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Old 10-04-2015, 08:39 AM   #9
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valentine?

"You smell her hair
Everywhere you go
You see her lips
Where you're leaving notes"

 
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