Thread for posting your musics - Page 62

paranoid · 02-25-2021, 02:51 PM

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Originally Posted by reprise85

sounds really good, you're a professional guitarist right?

not sure if you want constructive criticism but here it goes:
lyrics are the weak point for sure
guitar work is great. so why don't i hear more of it earlier?

overall sounds awesome though, good job

thank you!

elaborate more on the lyrics part?

soniclovenoize · 02-25-2021, 08:40 PM

Wrote/recorded a new song I am a bit proud of.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kM7...ew?usp=sharing

reprise85 · 02-26-2021, 12:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by paranoid

thank you!

elaborate more on the lyrics part?

a lot of cliched phrases

"get out of this town"
"sleep tight"
"heart and soul"

There's nothing really *wrong* with them, but I think also seeing them on screen makes the simplicity stick out. Maybe I'm in the wrong mindset, but the emotion of the music is very strong, the lyrics seem sort of throw away (no offense!)

paranoid · 02-26-2021, 12:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by reprise85

a lot of cliched phrases

"get out of this town"
"sleep tight"
"heart and soul"

There's nothing really *wrong* with them, but I think also seeing them on screen makes the simplicity stick out. Maybe I'm in the wrong mindset, but the emotion of the music is very strong, the lyrics seem sort of throw away (no offense!)

none taken! that's basically how i felt about them too.. but stuck with them to as i thought they had a charm to them. it's fair to say i am a guitarist first (my main band is instrumental), lyricist/vocalist second. a good amount of this stuff was also written when i was a lot younger, and because of the pandemic finally got around to just recording the songs.

if you're interested, please check out the whole album this comes from, interested to hear your take on it all, you seem to understand the vibe I'm going for here.

https://adambosse.bandcamp.com/album/fireflies-in-a-jar

buzzard · 02-28-2021, 02:25 AM

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Originally Posted by paranoid

Just made a video for one of the solo songs i released this past summer.. check it out!! lots of colors. fun guitars

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9EGlZFlffPg

I guess it's mostly the "rhythmic motif" or whatever the proper term might be, but it reminded me a lot of the following.

paranoid · 02-28-2021, 09:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by buzzard

I guess it's mostly the "rhythmic motif" or whatever the proper term might be, but it reminded me a lot of the following.

ha weird, never heard this before. I'd say the song is probably most directly influenced by sonic youths sunday and zwans danger boy

Joey Goldberg · 03-04-2021, 05:17 PM

swell little write-up on a release we got comin' out tomorrow

https://entropymag.org/warganization-inauguration/

Joey Goldberg · 03-05-2021, 02:27 AM

and well would you look at that... it's tomorrow!

paranoid · 03-05-2021, 05:17 PM

band camp day, my band fred cracklin has a pre order for our new vinyl LP. it's a split with another band called first children (members of landowner) from the land of western massachusetts

https://fredcracklin.bandcamp.com/album/fc-split

paranoid · 03-19-2021, 03:33 PM

My band released our new split LP today, go give it a listen. take drugs before you do

https://fredcracklin.bandcamp.com/album/fc-split

smashingjj · 03-19-2021, 03:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Joey Goldberg

that you?

smashingjj · 03-19-2021, 06:24 PM

fuckin eh?

Alice · 03-20-2021, 10:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by paranoid

band camp day, my band fred cracklin has a pre order for our new vinyl LP. it's a split with another band called first children (members of landowner) from the land of western massachusetts

https://fredcracklin.bandcamp.com/album/fc-split

Gonna give this a listen later. Just found out about Landowner recently and love them. Do you know if Rong is still around? Please say yes

smashingjj · 03-20-2021, 11:27 AM

Rong is fuckin awesome

Alice · 03-20-2021, 11:42 AM

I know!

Alice · 03-20-2021, 11:43 AM

And I really want them to make more music

paranoid · 03-20-2021, 01:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice

Gonna give this a listen later. Just found out about Landowner recently and love them. Do you know if Rong is still around? Please say yes

yes!! great friends of ours, we were actually going to do a small summer tour with them but of course the pandemic hit.

paranoid · 03-20-2021, 01:22 PM

as far as if they're still a thing.. I'm pretty sure, but like us and everyone else it's been slow going.

smashingjj · 03-20-2021, 01:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Alice

And I really want them to make more music

They reminded me of No Babies who are equally awesome

smashingjj · 03-20-2021, 01:42 PM

whoa, 3 people talking about music on one day, this board is alive!

Alice · 03-24-2021, 08:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by paranoid

My band released our new split LP today, go give it a listen. take drugs before you do

https://fredcracklin.bandcamp.com/album/fc-split

I really enjoyed this. The double tracked guitars just before the thirteen minute mark are great

Alice · 03-24-2021, 08:23 PM

And then after that, I don't know if those are properly called tempo shifts or what but yes, I like this a whole lot

Alice · 07:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by smashingjj

They reminded me of No Babies who are equally awesome

This was cool too! Thanks!

Alice · 03-24-2021, 08:27 PM

fucking eh?

Alice · 07:29 AM

Alice · 07:29 AM

smashingjj · 04-02-2021, 05:50 AM

soniclovenoize · 04-02-2021, 09:40 AM

A final Awkward Bodies single since we broke up etc etc. Originally recorded Summer 2015, mixed last week.

03-05-2021, 02:27 AM	#1838
Joey Goldberg Apocalyptic Poster Location: in the line for drinks (or is it just tickets to buy the drinks?) Posts: 3,858	and well would you look at that... it's tomorrow! <a href="https://warganization.bandcamp.com/album/inauguration">Inauguration by Warganization</a>

03-24-2021, 08:28 PM	#1855
Alice Minion of Satan Location: i am volatile, a free spirit, a rogue agent Posts: 6,256	. Last edited by Alice : 03-25-2021 at 07:29 AM.

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Alice Minion of Satan Location: i am volatile, a free spirit, a rogue agent Posts: 6,256	. Last edited by Alice : 03-25-2021 at 07:29 AM.

04-02-2021, 09:40 AM	#1858
soniclovenoize Minion of Satan Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 5,544	<a href="https://awkwardbodies.bandcamp.com/track/sinking-ships-boats">Sinking Ships (Boats) by Awkward Bodies</a> A final Awkward Bodies single since we broke up etc etc. Originally recorded Summer 2015, mixed last week.

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02-25-2021, 08:40 PM	#1832
soniclovenoize Minion of Satan Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 5,544	Wrote/recorded a new song I am a bit proud of. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kM7...ew?usp=sharing

03-04-2021, 05:17 PM	#1837
Joey Goldberg Apocalyptic Poster Location: in the line for drinks (or is it just tickets to buy the drinks?) Posts: 3,858	swell little write-up on a release we got comin' out tomorrow https://entropymag.org/warganization-inauguration/

03-05-2021, 05:17 PM	#1839
paranoid Minion of Satan Location: up a tree Posts: 5,848	band camp day, my band fred cracklin has a pre order for our new vinyl LP. it's a split with another band called first children (members of landowner) from the land of western massachusetts https://fredcracklin.bandcamp.com/album/fc-split

03-19-2021, 03:33 PM	#1840
paranoid Minion of Satan Location: up a tree Posts: 5,848	My band released our new split LP today, go give it a listen. take drugs before you do https://fredcracklin.bandcamp.com/album/fc-split

03-19-2021, 06:24 PM	#1842
smashingjj fucking eh! Location: mtv spring break hosted by pauly d Posts: 36,061	fuckin eh?

03-20-2021, 11:27 AM	#1844
smashingjj fucking eh! Location: mtv spring break hosted by pauly d Posts: 36,061	Rong is fuckin awesome

03-20-2021, 11:42 AM	#1845
Alice Minion of Satan Location: i am volatile, a free spirit, a rogue agent Posts: 6,256	I know!

03-20-2021, 11:43 AM	#1846
Alice Minion of Satan Location: i am volatile, a free spirit, a rogue agent Posts: 6,256	And I really want them to make more music

03-20-2021, 01:22 PM	#1848
paranoid Minion of Satan Location: up a tree Posts: 5,848	as far as if they're still a thing.. I'm pretty sure, but like us and everyone else it's been slow going.

03-20-2021, 01:42 PM	#1850
smashingjj fucking eh! Location: mtv spring break hosted by pauly d Posts: 36,061	whoa, 3 people talking about music on one day, this board is alive!

03-24-2021, 08:23 PM	#1852
Alice Minion of Satan Location: i am volatile, a free spirit, a rogue agent Posts: 6,256	And then after that, I don't know if those are properly called tempo shifts or what but yes, I like this a whole lot

03-24-2021, 08:27 PM	#1854
Alice Minion of Satan Location: i am volatile, a free spirit, a rogue agent Posts: 6,256	fucking eh?

04-02-2021, 05:50 AM	#1857
smashingjj fucking eh! Location: mtv spring break hosted by pauly d Posts: 36,061

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