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View Poll Results: Which poem is the best?
Poem A 0 0%
Poem B 1 25.00%
Poem C 2 50.00%
Poem D 0 0%
Poem # 1 25.00%
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:22 PM   #1
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which poem is the best?

POEM A

murder and incest
let me caress
stomach can't digest
gingerly breast
piece of your chest
lovey dovey bullshit eternally rest

POEM B

i do not like penis
no i do not
but i do possess penis
cuz penis i got
i do like vagina
and i do not have
if you have vagina
please let me grab?

POEM C

i'm dead mentally
i'm dead physically
i'm dead individually
why would you get with me?
you must be mad at your mom
or mad at your dad
cuz he didn't rape you
like i would have


POEM D

Erase your thoughts and your dreams
Keep your pain remain insane
pain is your proof numb your tooth
supermans dead and hell is a phonebooth
relax your nerves braincells fried
no angels, but bombs and bullets fly
pain and emptiness is all i feel inside
the only thing i fear now is being alive




POEM E

death is certain
life is not
close the curtain
the show stopped
hearts not beating
body rots
no more bleeding
blood clots
and i'm thinking
what you got
you're so lucky
i'd trade spots

they all cry now
and look down
it's crazy how
you're in the ground
tears dripping
they stand around
ears ringing
but no sounds
i'm not sad though
i'm just lost
lifes a hassle
deaths the cost
what i feel in me
deep in my chest
is really envy
for you and your rest

 
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:26 PM   #2
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oops that # is supposed to be an E on the poll but i'm sure you could figure that out, because you all are so smart.

 
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:27 PM   #3
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I'm going to refrain from commenting. hi!

 
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:28 PM   #4
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B...hands down.
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:31 PM   #5
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hehe this board is sick.. C is winning, wow. i didn't know you all were that fucked up.

 
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:32 PM   #6
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B...hands down.
hehe i wrote that one for you sweety *wink*

 
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:42 PM   #7
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TRENT!?! IZ THAT YUO!?!?
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