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Old 04-03-2017, 11:52 PM   #9
Jelly Blossom
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Originally Posted by Shallowed View Post
"I wish I was blank"

Comes off as awkward and lazily written to me.
"I fear that I am ordinary, just like everyone"

Talk about lazy... the opening line to "Muzzle" has always bothered me.

If you're ordinary, then you're the status quo. By definition you're just like everyone.

He attempts to be profound, but it's an epic fail as redundant statement is redundant.

 
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