View Full Version : I wrote this song...


ZackZ
05-10-2004, 01:44 PM
A song I wrote (http://www.kansaz.com/images/lizzysong.mp3)

:erm :erm :erm :erm

cap'n jazz
05-10-2004, 01:57 PM
I just wanted to be the first person to say that it WAS worse than your typical Thom Yorke "solo".

Okay, I'll download it in a minute

cap'n jazz
05-10-2004, 02:23 PM
Originally posted by cap'n jazz
worse than your typical Thom Yorke "solo".

C33
05-10-2004, 02:26 PM
hih...james ihaish ;)

sledge
05-10-2004, 02:32 PM
http://www.aidforfriends.org/pennies.jpg

Mayfuck
05-10-2004, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by sledge
http://www.aidforfriends.org/pennies.jpg

Yeah, kinda.

Mayfuck
05-10-2004, 03:27 PM
it wasn't bad actually, kinda expected it to be worse.

DeviousJ
05-10-2004, 03:40 PM
If you belieeeeve
They put a man on the moon
<i>man on the moooooooon</i>

It's all ok, sing it like you mean it though

I_was_aborted
05-10-2004, 04:01 PM
Seriously....hasn't there been enough songs which just go from G to A minor the whole verse. Not that using common chord progressions are bad but you gotta add something to make it stand out(besides shitty uninteresting vocal melody and typical short crap chorus) or else it just sounds like 500 other things that noone likes.

I'd give it a D-. Something everyone with a slight guitar ability has written and played.

smashingjj
05-10-2004, 04:09 PM
I can hear SP in the chord progression.

RockLobster
05-10-2004, 04:13 PM
im not even going to bother to listen...i know it will just suck the nut zack.

ZackZ
05-10-2004, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by I_was_aborted
Seriously....hasn't there been enough songs which just go from G to A minor the whole verse. Not that using common chord progressions are bad but you gotta add something to make it stand out(besides shitty uninteresting vocal melody and typical short crap chorus) or else it just sounds like 500 other things that noone likes.

I'd give it a D-. Something everyone with a slight guitar ability has written and played.

I'll have to come up with something more ambitious one of these days. School is out in two weeks, so I'll have more time for a more concerted effort.

spring
05-10-2004, 09:31 PM
i liked it.

you should try to sing in a lower key...because your falsetto is a bit weak. other than that :) very cute.

ZackZ
05-10-2004, 10:37 PM
Originally posted by spring
i liked it.

you should try to sing in a lower key...because your falsetto is a bit weak. other than that :) very cute.

I was going fo the "Billy Corgan rough demo cut recorded in a shack in Montana" vocals.