ZackZ
05-10-2004, 01:44 PM
A song I wrote (http://www.kansaz.com/images/lizzysong.mp3)
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View Full Version : I wrote this song... ZackZ 05-10-2004, 01:44 PM A song I wrote (http://www.kansaz.com/images/lizzysong.mp3) :erm :erm :erm :erm cap'n jazz 05-10-2004, 01:57 PM I just wanted to be the first person to say that it WAS worse than your typical Thom Yorke "solo". Okay, I'll download it in a minute cap'n jazz 05-10-2004, 02:23 PM Originally posted by cap'n jazz worse than your typical Thom Yorke "solo". C33 05-10-2004, 02:26 PM hih...james ihaish ;) sledge 05-10-2004, 02:32 PM http://www.aidforfriends.org/pennies.jpg Mayfuck 05-10-2004, 03:26 PM Originally posted by sledge http://www.aidforfriends.org/pennies.jpg Yeah, kinda. Mayfuck 05-10-2004, 03:27 PM it wasn't bad actually, kinda expected it to be worse. DeviousJ 05-10-2004, 03:40 PM If you belieeeeve They put a man on the moon <i>man on the moooooooon</i> It's all ok, sing it like you mean it though I_was_aborted 05-10-2004, 04:01 PM Seriously....hasn't there been enough songs which just go from G to A minor the whole verse. Not that using common chord progressions are bad but you gotta add something to make it stand out(besides shitty uninteresting vocal melody and typical short crap chorus) or else it just sounds like 500 other things that noone likes. I'd give it a D-. Something everyone with a slight guitar ability has written and played. smashingjj 05-10-2004, 04:09 PM I can hear SP in the chord progression. RockLobster 05-10-2004, 04:13 PM im not even going to bother to listen...i know it will just suck the nut zack. ZackZ 05-10-2004, 09:25 PM Originally posted by I_was_aborted Seriously....hasn't there been enough songs which just go from G to A minor the whole verse. Not that using common chord progressions are bad but you gotta add something to make it stand out(besides shitty uninteresting vocal melody and typical short crap chorus) or else it just sounds like 500 other things that noone likes. I'd give it a D-. Something everyone with a slight guitar ability has written and played. I'll have to come up with something more ambitious one of these days. School is out in two weeks, so I'll have more time for a more concerted effort. spring 05-10-2004, 09:31 PM i liked it. you should try to sing in a lower key...because your falsetto is a bit weak. other than that :) very cute. ZackZ 05-10-2004, 10:37 PM Originally posted by spring i liked it. you should try to sing in a lower key...because your falsetto is a bit weak. other than that :) very cute. I was going fo the "Billy Corgan rough demo cut recorded in a shack in Montana" vocals. |