myosis
11-15-2011, 12:38 AM
we have a photography thread... but there must be some writers.
let's see your talent, Netphoria!
let's see your talent, Netphoria!
View Full Version : In this thread, post your poetry myosis 11-15-2011, 12:38 AM we have a photography thread... but there must be some writers. let's see your talent, Netphoria! stripes 11-15-2011, 12:39 AM poetry's gay myosis 11-15-2011, 12:49 AM come out of the closet, stripes reprise85 11-15-2011, 12:52 AM i write lyrics but no poetry myosis 11-15-2011, 12:58 AM share what you'd like, guys supermaid 11-15-2011, 01:06 AM roses are red violets are blue i'll fuck you with a rake reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:08 AM A year has passed since I've been gone I'm still right and you're still wrong I can't imagine ever seeing you again Well I'm over you and everything that was Still on my own just been thinking of What could have been ours to keep Now a hate's been born of a love so deep I will not give in to fear My head says run but my heart says heal Learn to live again, find happiness my long lost friend I will not be afraid to try I'm reaching out and I don't know why I even want to know You can't learn the art of letting go Time and time again you lied Don't believe what you see with your eyes You've gotta look inside to find out what's real Well I look and see what I've become Don't regret anything that I've done What could have been shouldn't be And you mean nothing more to me http://soundcloud.com/lasthurrah25/01-learn-to-live-again reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:10 AM What have I become My precious one You made me hate my life You made me hate my love And I don't even care To change the way I feel You don't even know me You only love yourself I changed the day I met you And you don't even know I am what you made me Is this what you want? When will it end When is enough enough? Will you ever shut off When will it stop? I have heard a thousand lies Seen a thousand ways to break A person down I wish I didn't know you, I didn't need you But I'll learn To live without Life must be hard without Someone to put down Do you ever wonder Where you'd be now If there was no one to blame, If you could be a normal Selfish human being? I have heard a thousand lies Seen a thousand ways to break A person down I wish I didn't know you, I didn't need you But I'll learn To live without http://soundcloud.com/lasthurrah25/04-without myosis 11-15-2011, 01:16 AM that sounds personal, i hope you were able to get over these difficult times reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:19 AM thanks :) those are pretty old and indeed life has continued reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:23 AM time, i'm forever waiting time, i'm forever waiting time, i'm forever waiting... won't you show me how won't you show me live forever time, i'm forever waiting... will that life could change will that life could come together i walk into the rain work too hard to surrender but i do time, i'm forever waiting http://soundcloud.com/lasthurrah25/10-surrender probably will regret posting in the morning but ya know midnight does weird things to my inhibitions myosis 11-15-2011, 01:27 AM i mostly write in french but i guess i should contribute reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:29 AM yes please do myosis 11-15-2011, 01:34 AM digit log. my illness is of you. off whom flow silver salts. in the dark room. struck by daylight. picturesque ones. knew not what cliché was. Dead Frequency 11-15-2011, 01:40 AM The world is a werewolf, with really big fangs Secretly hairy, prolly running in a gang Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 01:40 AM favorite thing i've written from a conceptual standpoint: nothing exists, nothing fades, nothing changes all is here, now, forevermore reaching out, splitting atoms, killing stars all shattered take my hand dark star death angel fall into space one more sound, one more thought, one more fracture holding on, but drifting off feel my rock - going soft, turned to dust my own saturn kill them all my dear make everything blank not a speck of life should escape you hear me now, i am silent, you are loud empty words, heard nevermore reaching out, across chasms ever far nothing matters all shattered my own saturn take my hand dark star death angel fall into space reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:46 AM tell me you have music for that reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:46 AM take my hand dark star death angel :rockon: Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 01:47 AM only a VERY rough demo playing live... messed some lyrics up, my brother fucks up the drums a lot at the end <object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ft racks%2F22859529"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ft racks%2F22859529" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/theglow/live-in-suburbia">Live in Suburbia</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/theglow">The Glow</a></span> It's the second song Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 01:48 AM Recorded with 2 mics in a bedroom in a suburban home :rockon: reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:51 AM dude you do really have talent it's rough but it has lots of potential. your voice also reminds me of someone else but i can't put my finger on who reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:52 AM digit log. my illness is of you. off whom flow silver salts. in the dark room. struck by daylight. picturesque ones. knew not what cliché was. i really like the last two lines Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 01:53 AM big muff on the first song :rockon: that one is wrote recently when i couldnt buy beer on sunday cause of christians :rockon: reprise85 11-15-2011, 01:56 AM hey, inspiration is inspiration these days i take it however i can get it Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 01:56 AM this wasn't meant to last maybe if you didn't start me up so fast drunk on sunday, you can kiss my ass we'll be the first ones out, you'll be the last drunk on sunday, you will make an ass of yourself, and we'll just laugh at you drunk on sunday, we can love each other more than you ever could drunk on any other day, you will make a wish to be just like me so go ahead and smoke your victory cigar when you go make a straight line with the door repeat chorus drunk on sunday just like me x 4 butthurt 11-15-2011, 02:07 AM I'm not writing in this anymore. Xanga is moronic... just like I always though it was. I refuse to conform to this emo whinefest. Rawr... you should all get Myspace instead. Ill still check yours though because your suffering amuses me. Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 02:07 AM :rockon: ^^^ Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 02:08 AM boy, seven years sure goes quick. Luke de Spa 11-15-2011, 02:22 AM favorite thing i've written from a conceptual standpoint: nothing exists, nothing fades, nothing changes all is here, now, forevermore reaching out, splitting atoms, killing stars all shattered take my hand dark star death angel fall into space one more sound, one more thought, one more fracture holding on, but drifting off feel my rock - going soft, turned to dust my own saturn kill them all my dear make everything blank not a speck of life should escape you hear me now, i am silent, you are loud empty words, heard nevermore reaching out, across chasms ever far nothing matters all shattered my own saturn take my hand dark star death angel fall into space do yourself a favour and stop listening to the pumpkins Dogfighter28 11-15-2011, 02:22 AM i'm waaaaaaaaaay ahead of you bro Elvis The Fat Years 11-15-2011, 02:27 AM one more sound, one more thought, one more fracture holding on, but drifting off feel my rock - going soft, turned to dust viagra so pure :cry: slunken 11-15-2011, 02:38 AM here's a new one that is still a work in progress but it steals two lines from SP songs haha. format's all wrong but the line breaks are the same The Soft Places Sometimes it will seem natural to wear your mistakes on the right side of your face. To come back Try not to think about it. That nobody wants to believe in anything in this unfamiliar century. staying drunk for most of the 1800s Here we are still trading places building monsters in the basement in a world made for train like spooky desperate prophets in the missing persons bureau. I wanted you to bulletproof the evening in preparation for hula-hooping around the subjectivity. All older dreams make sense now. shouting political murder ballads to the left I told you so a big number of times in all the foreign countries real snow leaves teething impressions on the barrel like "oh hell a flatter universe" in the expected areas This pony has but a few tricks. improving the carbon flea market and crushed by the closing of eyes, solemly refuse to let the sun get us wet and what we believe in are the ghosts of the future moving into town and of all things change problematic searching and aching out of here gone down around no reason to be exclusionary, divided sitting on the fence of a half man's mythology escorted from the land of the living How indestructibe we are according to time and disbelief We have come expecting metaphor but preferring the company of strangers. slunken 11-15-2011, 02:45 AM also i guess i should clarify that these aren't song lyrics? w th Luke de Spa 11-15-2011, 02:46 AM words drawn out of hats i then solemnly misspell indestructible slunken 11-15-2011, 02:48 AM well would you look at that i did mispell a word or two. nbd this isn't going to print anytime soon. and yes it's a chinto what of it Luke de Spa 11-15-2011, 02:48 AM in the town where i was born lived a man who sailed to sea. and he told us of his life in the land of submarines. slunken 11-15-2011, 02:52 AM poetry has such a bad rap which sucks. if anybody is remotely interested i can't recommend ted berrigan enough he's the tops myosis 11-15-2011, 10:05 AM i really like the last two lines nice to know because it is translated and totally different in french Starla 11-15-2011, 10:35 AM Sitting here with my coffee and I hate you, i hate you eating a big muffin and i hate you, hate you i have extra blueberries and they remind me of your kisses and then i hate you, hate you you told me that you only did it for the nookie, like limp bizkit said in his song you told me you wanted forever where did it go wrong? and now i hate you... i hate you barden 11-15-2011, 10:58 AM “Every drop of blood I've ever spilled has soaked into this red African soil But any claw that tore my belly flesh Was rewarded with decay And every plant that never grew Was tainted the same way If you stood that day for a righteous man You would be waiting, sun baking, right there all day” Those bones have been disturbed Curious frenzied hippo, drunk on musk, rolled them into the ground. We could follow their stumbled spoor back into the lake But we'll never track him now, and those hippo are so angry Those reeds would have suffocated the river if they hadn't forced on through But we never taught him how to swim cause crocodiles drown too barden 11-15-2011, 10:59 AM To see that face again We'd have to keep it fresh Float the body in the frozen lake Fish too cold to study flesh barden 11-15-2011, 11:03 AM Sculpt a landscape With a hammer lined with teeth 'Who'd have thought...' He snapped and chipped '...we'd be eating mountains, you and me'. Eulogy 11-15-2011, 11:04 AM It's just one of those days Where you don't wanna wake up Everything's fucked Everybody sucks And you don't really know why But you wanna justify Rippin' someone's head off barden 11-15-2011, 11:05 AM This one is called Frustrated Ghosts! Banging windows Slamming doors No one's paying any attention at all Just the whine of the wind The scratch of the trees No haunting here at all barden 11-15-2011, 11:06 AM Blind owls sink their teeth through little holes in the hut every morning, when they fly away little stars in the day barden 11-15-2011, 11:07 AM fuck music i hate it. myosis 11-15-2011, 11:29 AM thanks barden. i got one in english from my blue obsession of last year. myosis 11-15-2011, 11:29 AM my bedd bled blue. did you know that of all colors my least favorite blue has always been so my least favorite you has always been blue would you know that of all beds mine bleeds its host for my own keep mine sleeps the most in my home deep thus should you know that i can't have you know my sheets turned yellow my teeth grind mellow . myosis 11-15-2011, 01:04 PM the context may sound stupid but my teeth were turning yellow in parts because the enamel is wearing out, and the dentist gave me this blue liquid called fluorinse. i had this theme of blurring the lines between my emotions and my medical conditions myosis 11-15-2011, 01:06 PM also i had a thing with the color blue because it's always been a color i dislike for no reason and i'd been called "fleur bleue" and it made me angry. i was in love with a girl with blue eyes and a blue aura. i had to be careful about what i'd say to her or do because she liked me very much but is very dedicated and faithful, and this put her in a personal crisis about her boyfriend. she would easily retreat and close herself. 28if 11-15-2011, 03:31 PM i had to be careful about what i'd say to her or do because she liked me very much but is very dedicated and faithful, and this put her in a personal crisis about her boyfriend. she would easily retreat and close herself. lol myosis 11-15-2011, 04:24 PM hmm look at mister relationship here. myosis 11-15-2011, 04:28 PM my family life is in jeopardy lol The Omega Concern 11-15-2011, 04:36 PM Agent No Name Because your life is not yours anyway enemies of the state want to kill us all its a sign of the times this the time of your lives it could be a genocide in the name of allah Can you hear us now what happens if you listen we'll all be in danger of a crucifixion for its a sign of the times this the time of your lives could be an armageddon apocolyptical visions and all those fake rock stars stealing all those songs afraid of the name cancel to the cause reprise85 11-15-2011, 05:09 PM del supermaid 11-15-2011, 06:07 PM Because your life is not yours anyway enemies of the state want to kill us all its a sign of the times this the time of your lives it could be a genocide in the name of allah Can you hear us now what happens if you listen we'll all be in danger of a crucifixion for its a sign of the times this the time of your lives could be an armageddon apocolyptical visions and all those fake rock stars stealing all those songs afraid of the name cancel to the cause a big thanks to nickelback for coming out tonight SlingeroGuitaro 11-15-2011, 07:01 PM my dick is like a tree when i read bad poetry redbreegull 11-15-2011, 07:05 PM poetry is the hardest art form to do well barden 11-15-2011, 07:48 PM thats because it's the most gay. myosis 11-15-2011, 08:39 PM i'd say drama (theater) is the hardest to write. Sepiae 11-15-2011, 08:42 PM That's a decent point. I know some writers who are excellent everything but dialogue, and that's all playwriting really is. That said, I'd rather write a play than a poem. But I'll stick to stories/novels. myosis 11-15-2011, 08:46 PM dialogue is hard, but it's not all there is to it. you can write nice dialogue and still end up with a pointless shallow play. you can write a play with no dialogue at all. myosis 11-15-2011, 08:48 PM chameau blau. let me hit the nails on your humped heads let me quiesce and i'll give you a smoke thick enough to hide weary skin tan your camel hide . Dead Frequency 11-15-2011, 08:52 PM One day this guy I knew Walked out of a bar, Reeking of rot gut hard A liquor, holding a beer in his hand. And he walked out and gave a big stumbling "Fuck you" To the establishment that day. He was hard pressed on luck, he spent all his money, But he had a beer in his hand. He had no home to call his own, So he just started to walk away. When two bouncers came to and said "Did you think I was kidding? I told you not to leave this place With a beer in your hand." And about that time, the broken band began to play "Don't leave here with a beer in your hand, man!" The two bouncers stood their ground And made the drunken man fall to his. They punched him, and they kicked him, And when they felt done, they walked away And that's when the drunken man stood up straight. He got the bouncers' attention and laughed, And slurred his words, this is what he had to say: "I thought I said 'fuck you'. Your mother's a whore." And about that time he pulled a gun out of his pocket And shot them both, with a wild-eyed grin, watching the gore. Despite it all, He pulled a beer out of his pocket. And walked away. supermaid 11-15-2011, 09:11 PM i'd say drama (theater) is the hardest to write. jazz hands = sloppy penmanship obscured01 11-15-2011, 09:12 PM <font color="dab9ea">I used to write a shit load of poetry back in high school when I was all depressed and moody. I kind of grew out of it though. I'm sure I can find some poetry I wrote from college but eh. </font> barden 11-15-2011, 09:12 PM mmmmbop a chiggy chung, i said mmmmbop. What were the words to the that one again? Mablak 11-15-2011, 09:59 PM Okay this isn't poetry, just a travelin' tale sort of song I wrote and later decided I didn't like. Reaching land's end, we're all out of ground The sky was sovereign, crowned with a blue cloud Blue that stuck made me dread til the dawn The sceptered seven who summon the sun You've been kind to pull me through the wind Heaven seeking, such years we've misled Took to travel so fearing the drought Beckoned lands we found fecund with doubt Water wanting we needed a head Blood falling west says we'll find home again Marred by patience the air reaches in Stifling mercy that holds back the grim They sunk your goodbyes and you suffered a name They called you December's deep, Eden of waves And like them I fear that I want to remain I do, I do, I do I saw you disintegrate all through the dark I fled from the up again down again star Who made my eyes stumble asleep and awake With not enough love in my body to take With not enough love in my body to take away Scattered forward like kites full of tears Compass overcomes heart in our dares Fleeing omens that needle our sleep Leading back to the frostiest deep Running to snowflake eyes just like yours Caught in a black wave that led me ashore It said in each dream there is a door To help one discern evening from morn I have to believe that you'll take shape again The ocean is long and I need a good friend I know that you're gone and the fates will not bend I do, I do, I do I saw you disintegrate all through the dark I fled from the up again down again star Who made my eyes stumble asleep and awake With not enough love in my body to take And over the castles that mark where you are I pled with the up again down again star To bring you back loving and wanting less deep With not enough love in your body to keep With not enough love in your body to keep for me Luke de Spa 11-16-2011, 12:42 AM top of the line in utility sports unexplained fires are a matter for the courts Luke de Spa 11-16-2011, 12:42 AM canyonero SuckSuckStyle 11-16-2011, 11:02 PM I wrote this for my best friend who I have been in love with since we were 17 and decided that I really needed to put space between us for my own sanity. I'm Jim Halpert, she's Pam Beasley and she's going to marry Roy. After 10 years I had to cut the cord and tell her we can't be jim and pam anymore. anyway this is what I sent her (after a loving conversation) I don't know how to just be your friend without being completely in love with you and I don't know how to be completely in love with you and just be your friend so i dont think we can share tea anymore you know i'm only a call away no matter what never doubt that i love you but right now, i have to drink my own tea. and please don't tell me you love me not like you do now i don't think we can share beds when we visit don't forget that i love you but i can sleep on the floor please don't tell me you miss me when i'm thousands of miles away know that i write you love from my tent but i need you to encourage my adventure and not ask me to share nights and tea with you back home i cant share tea with you not like i do now if i want to share tea with you on our 96th birthday. D. 11-16-2011, 11:12 PM all i have are like, scattered notes here and there on my external. i can never get past my first initial idea. :( I can hear the sound of the dead end kids as they reach up high into heaven kissing God on the hands and they say "no this is not high enough" and them i'm all "..." myosis 11-17-2011, 12:12 AM all i have are like, scattered notes here and there on my external. i can never get past my first initial idea. :( I can hear the sound of the dead end kids as they reach up high into heaven kissing God on the hands and they say "no this is not high enough" and them i'm all "..." hmm what did you wish to add? slunken 11-17-2011, 12:28 AM thats because it's the most gay. no it just has a bad reputation because let's face it when ppl think of poetry they think of edgar allen poe or robert frost or that lesbian or beat poetry. i think lord byron is cool. :cool: slunken 11-17-2011, 12:32 AM new york school poetry (the antithesis of beat poetry) is my favorite - frank o'hara, john ashbery, ted berrigan, etc. newer dudes i love anselm berrigan (teds son that he had with alice notley - another ny school poet), anthony mccann, dean young, and matt hart. they make poetry fun and exuberant. slunken 11-17-2011, 12:33 AM as opposed to self-indulgent slunken 11-17-2011, 12:34 AM the problem with bad poetry is that its mostly just people writing in their diaries about how the feel and nobody really wants to read that. markt1972 11-17-2011, 01:52 AM this ^ markt1972 11-17-2011, 02:17 AM nimrod's son was his name playing with cards was his game running his mouth was his hobby had a boyfriend named bobby inside each other they came http://i.imgur.com/Sfyqm.jpg barden 11-17-2011, 07:42 AM this man has so far contributed beautiful art to both the poetry and the photography thread, and I'm already feeling more cultured because of it. supermaid 11-18-2011, 08:40 PM wish i had brought a snack but what's this? a tiny orange in my bag :) Dogfighter28 08-02-2012, 12:14 AM You brought me doom as your cigarette came to the end of its fuse I know I said I wanna inhale you, like a plume Then I left mushroom clouds to stand as dunes So few You brought me doom At least you attempted to I'm blinded by a light that was blocked out by you In an indigo room. Enough space to upset the childhood colors in you. Another view I locked my room And went for a hike where the wild summer grew Pebbles flowing, hands are passing through I suppressed my moral compass and the souls of my shoes I'm one with you It's almost done Your doomsday machine created for one I step inside, its going to be fun To understand just how this thing is run You're scum. Dogfighter28 08-02-2012, 12:26 AM ok MAYBE that was a downer so to counterbalance: sunshine, break through your cloud. it's all i need to see. this sadness is tearing a hole through my heart. the fever running through your spine - in your hands - and in mine smile it's better that way smile, anyway question every word you have ever said pull away the veil from your face and your life will be the greatest poem I will ever read pull away the veil from your face smile it's better that way smile, anyway Trotskilicious 08-02-2012, 12:36 AM filament livewire apocalypse cutting through limp ecstasies of steel and carbon gunships of intricate design crawl overhead, payloads of dark torpedoes and furious oblivion skywire ultimatum crosses the end of lines and darkening access of complete twilight nuclear haywire digital armageddon helicopter mutations and car crashes automobile accidents vehicular collisions crisscrossing chemtrails and hybrid drone strikes hazard a million flyover impossibilities and helter skelter impressions slunken 08-02-2012, 12:47 AM In The Darkest I’m sorry but you shouldn’t have walked through the force field like that I had intended to come back and beautifully reconstruct you at a later date but this never happened so stop me if I’m being foolish and stop me if you’ve heard this one before but a good guest will always leave a thank you note (among other things) like a hat or depression So here’s hoping while taping my body back together in the enrichment chamber I was only seeking nourishment from the stars I was only looking for guest appearances by my future mistakes coming back at me Supposedly there are other ways to utilize an oracle in the darkest this is now called my stopwatch we can pay to have our thoughts shipped direct from the warehouse This is now called the reproduction gallery before when it was buried it wasn’t buried deep enough “I guess it used to have a back door” for escape-based proselytizing no fear here / these colors... this thread has been closed by a moderator this poem has been flagged as spam Luke de Spa 08-02-2012, 06:11 AM Campbell A guy on the street Looked me in the eye Said: "'Sup, Campbell?" My name is not Campbell So now I am aware of Campbell. Campbell, my doppelgänger. Things aren't going to be easy for you any more, Campbell. You've kept yourself well-hidden But I'm on to you. Luke de Spa 08-02-2012, 06:11 AM that would have been a regular post but i added line breaks. now it's a poem Luke de Spa 08-02-2012, 06:33 AM i was digging around some old stuff and found this sterling effort from 2003: Here Come here, by your delicate ways Come near, with a gentle embrace I know this can’t last, know you’ll leave with the weather Don’t think of that now, there’ll be a time that we’re together THIS IS TOTAL FUCKING DRECK COLDPLAY ANYONE? SOMEONE CALL A FUCKING AMBULANCE awesome Kahlo 08-02-2012, 06:44 AM Are you still making music Luke? Not checked your site for a while... Luke de Spa 08-02-2012, 07:06 AM still writing but haven't done much in the way of recording for ages. but i did start working on an arrangement for this one last weekend: <iframe width="420" height="315" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/VcDpNcA9KVM?rel=0" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> song's been kicking around since the start of last year but, well, that's what happens when i'm not writing for a band i guess Starla 08-02-2012, 08:54 AM A Demon's Poem there are people on the street at night demons rise up out of the street grates, flying to the roof tops they dive and bite at the limbs, eating and crushing bones screams pillage my deep sleep I awaken and run down the stairs into the evil night in darkness I stand, listening crunching, clawing, tearing, and chewing laughter a demon walks over to a soda machine and pays for his diet coke Oh happy demon, riddled with aspartame brain fuck you demon you are a ghost of an ancient world archaeologists have yet to discover you are hungry, old demon, but fuck you for real i am a program now reduced to codes and words, marching to Gustav Mahler Oh Vienna, Vienna Hey old demon, rapping demon driving your car too fast chaka chaka kahn chaka kahn dangerously creeping rolling up beside me, eating an in n out burger tempt me with a grilled onion seduce me with mayonaise as long as I have teeth I will bite you damn demon take your creeping ass back to hell I fucking hate you, mother fucker stealing my time, and my thoughts baby Jesus hates you now the baptismal fount might kill you the holy water is gonna stick in your throat and choke you swallowing might be a problem from here on out old black bird devil, fly to the tower shit on random people, old devil i hear warren g say REGULATORS and BOOM they arrive with their skittles and iced tea black hoodies in the night You will rise again drink your fucking tea and enjoy colors of the rainbow cause that damn watchman wants a trophy can I still supersize a big mac? At walmart the black demon birds, walk about, saying "Fuck yeah, America" robots with eyes for your pleasure, the check out girl will get on her knees and steal your soul, your life, your home, your family, your money she has hip hip hipster glasses to save you from your boring life Goodnight my love, to every hour and every day She can get you, she can tease you sing a strong death song before you tumble off a cliff and plunge to your death with the buffalos. old buzzards circling and screeching holding court a raven flies by, and sees you floating up to the stars biting at your dick, ripping it to shreds don't worry, you won't need it among your ancestors in the dresser drawer, new condoms lay next to your boxers I'll mail them to my neighbor, pregnant with her 8th child God bless UH-mericuh the condoms of a ghost might have good medicine reprise85 08-02-2012, 09:51 AM that's awesome, starla rottenugly 08-02-2012, 12:06 PM long division more like joy division rottenugly 08-02-2012, 12:10 PM chaka chaka kahn chaka kahn <iframe width="640" height="480" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/1XV5_WagxZg" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> reprise85 01-05-2017, 04:37 PM Here I am A dead person inside a living body And I have nowhere left to go Years lost and more to lose The point is gone, it left a long time ago Fair - what's fair but another deception? I've gotten what's fair from my own perspective Never feel, never sad, never lost, never alone My bones shake one by one inside me My heart a living, beating diary Of compromises too unsightly For anyone else to ever know I wonder where the line is drawn Those too broken to ever be one Where putting together creates more pieces And soon the pieces are so small they are dust Dusty bones, dusty mind, stupid girl your limitations are hardwired inside A brain too broken to ever be kind A brain too shallow to ever be wise FoolofaTook 01-05-2017, 05:41 PM Did you rly write that reprise? I like it. Especially the bones shaking. Here is my "tsp" poem i wrote in high school. don't judge me! Now sleep in peace Under your stars I hope you find Your heart May all your dreams Someday come true May all your hopes Find you. crabshack 01-05-2017, 07:23 PM Here I am Alone OK Not okay You dumb fucking dummy (to BC) reprise85 01-05-2017, 07:34 PM Did you rly write that reprise? I like it. Especially the bones shaking. Here is my "tsp" poem i wrote in high school. don't judge me! Now sleep in peace Under your stars I hope you find Your heart May all your dreams Someday come true May all your hopes Find you. yeah i wrote it immediately before posting it after a really hard therapy session where my therapist sorta kinda called me a coward and it upset me a lot. well i brought up saying that i feel like im a coward when it comes to some things and she was like... well kinda. all sorts of crazy shit went through my head after that and i am actually contemplating ending therapy. not because she said that but because if i'm going to be a coward there is no point in continuing. coward is apparently a trigger word lol FoolofaTook 01-05-2017, 11:48 PM Sorry to hear that your therapist sounds awful. I don't blame you for wanted to stop therapy with her. Being a coward is no joke, let me tell you. It grates the soul. :rockon: reprise85 01-06-2017, 01:23 AM she's not awful at all actually but i don't understand this Tchocky 01-06-2017, 08:42 PM I am gonna drink I think I'll go bowling too This Friday's a bore run2pee 01-08-2017, 02:39 PM Golden goat mother Breaking in. Another go round In my midnight bedroom. I zip on your britches while you're gone: It's all you left me, hanging round in my midnight Bedroom. Goat faced lady My favorite cell In the gravelly-grip, satin blooms and spikes It's not illegal but it's not allowed Wasn't caught, and it got me thru. Ew! Naming blue bruises after muses that pull the sheets loose of us . . . Ice cold bedroom filled to bursting With the dried-out husks of our prior pastimes Thought u heard knocking at the door; It's just the clock clapping hands Burnin it down, 4 am bedroom rite now If you hover above your bruise-baking boy, he'll do it for you. Ew! crabshack 01-08-2017, 10:40 PM black text in your mothers arms i'm tired so sick so just shut up i wish things were better in this realm or i was better at this cypher and coded empathy FoolofaTook 01-09-2017, 09:49 AM Burning it down 4 am rite? U toke in the predawn hours as well run2me? :smoke: FoolofaTook 01-14-2017, 12:12 PM How does a pertinent question like that remain ignored? I mean you guys discuss at great lenght things like rats and cats and heavy petting but I get nothing. I'm going to post a poem later today. This is its announcement. Consider yourselves duly warned. FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 06:31 PM LOOK OUT: Below the Purple Waves I know a mystic magic well Of syrup sickly sweet, For once into its depths I fell To oceans underneath. Six leagues below the purple waves I sank down languidly, Until I reached the submerged caves Beneath the syrup sea. Within those caverns deep and vast I wandered sluggishly, Until my eyes beheld at last A kingdom ruined for me. Of toppled towers and crumbling walls, Of broken temple domes. Of shattered spires and fallen halls, Of sunken sacred stones. Six years I slumbered in those caves In drunken fantasy, Until I quaffed the purple waves And drained the syrup sea. Enchanted by the mystic spell Of syrup sickly sweet, I drown within the magic well To dream of worlds beneath. Part II The Rapture of the Deep Wrapped in a nitrogen narcosis dream, Trapped in the realms of the submarine, Mired in the mud of precipitous sleep, Pinned to the floor of the poisonous deep. cork_soaker 01-16-2017, 06:42 PM an aphelion author, i see FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:01 PM A closet fan? Have you been following my career, breathlessly and somewhat moistly twixt the buttocks? cork_soaker 01-16-2017, 07:06 PM just patrolling for plagiarists cork_soaker 01-16-2017, 07:07 PM please don't take it personally FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:31 PM My name is Jonathan Stefanovic. Have I self plagiarized? FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:32 PM I was going to post the companion piece (also published by the Aphelion) but now that a top tier boarder like Cork Soaker has ruined things I might have to reconsider sharing my cherished literary accomplishments or, at the least, postponing it. FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:34 PM I've given this some srs thought and I have concluded that cork soaker was so impressed by the literary worth and conceptional soaring of my poem that he thought I plagiarized it. So it's all good cork soaker, its all good! myosis 01-16-2017, 07:36 PM great bio dude FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:40 PM I blame the cough syrup. For everything. myosis 01-16-2017, 07:41 PM seriously i enjoy unpretentious bios cork_soaker 01-16-2017, 07:44 PM I was going to post the companion piece (also published by the Aphelion) but now that a top tier boarder like Cork Soaker has ruined things I might have to reconsider sharing my cherished literary accomplishments or, at the least, postponing it. apologies, please do carry on! FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:45 PM Ok. My boris discography bit torrent download has fisnihed downloading so im gonna run away from this library while i still have my life (this place is crawling with sdas. they all hate me) FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 07:46 PM Sorry I snapped at you cork soaker. you have lived in morocco. i like you. please like me too. FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 08:55 PM Aw cork soaker pos repped me. :) Sorry I got inflamed. I am an Ares and sharing poetry always brings out my martial aspects. crabshack 01-16-2017, 09:22 PM thanks for listening yo soy el mejor 01-16-2017, 09:27 PM life is like a puzzle there so many pieces where do they go? nothing fits do me like a puzzle crabshack 01-16-2017, 09:28 PM do me like a puzzle redbreegull 01-16-2017, 10:06 PM all day I wait for that sweet truth to roll around death is coming soon redbreegull 01-16-2017, 10:08 PM sitting through a film some asshole on his cellphone turn it off or else buzzard 01-16-2017, 10:21 PM Actin' hard in the picture theatre, Play'n' Black Star, Sippin' meh cerveza. FoolofaTook 01-16-2017, 10:38 PM all your poems combined are not equal to even A SINGLE LINE of mine. god i'm angry!!! cork_soaker 01-16-2017, 11:29 PM Actin' hard in the picture theatre, Play'n' Black Star, Sippin' meh cerveza. n e way here z w .o ..n ...d ....e .....r ..........w ............a ...............l .....................l ~~ u slide into the ether~~ crabshack 01-16-2017, 11:34 PM i love my phone fuck you and fuck your film all of you can die suck my redbreegull 01-16-2017, 11:39 PM you guys kind of suck at haiku crabshack 01-16-2017, 11:48 PM you guys kind of suck at haiku uh-oh here comes the haiku master please master tell us what we've done wrong. did the 3rd line fail to reflect the state of the season? you fucking self-important jackass. how dare you. crabshack 01-16-2017, 11:51 PM oh wait i forgot, rbg has been to israel. he is a master of haiku. crabshack 01-16-2017, 11:53 PM how fucking dare you condescend to people like that. if you're a good person, maybe you just talk fast. if you're a bad person, you're being disrespectful. i oughta knock your fucking teeth out. The Omega Concern 01-17-2017, 12:08 AM A joyous form I, wisely declare, we're starting over, again Why would I realize, when it's over, it begins... Next time I know I'm leaving This time I swear I will and when I see the light I'll know why I'll just stand still And if I see another that I knew once before I will not take the offer to walk the hidden door It's alright, It's alright...It's all right to feel this way, It's alright And I will relay, the sense of a call, on this turn And I will delay, your senses to ride unless you return and get fooled again And when you know you're leaving See through Magi's eye void the trick from light to dark where the soul runs dry And if you see another that you knew once before Do not take the offer to walk through the hidden door redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:13 AM please master tell us what we've done wrong. apparently you can't count to five crabshack 01-17-2017, 12:20 AM I can't talk right now I'm watching Lassie. buzzard 01-17-2017, 12:21 AM It's kind of weird to assume that anybody else was attempting a haiku. There's not much challenge in succeeding. FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:22 AM What happebned to rhythm? Meter? RHYME? Fucking swine. FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:24 AM You guys prefer Shelley or Keats? redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:26 AM You guys prefer Shelley or Keats? Shelley is much better than Keats the real question is Keats or Yeats though FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:27 AM Whatever I bet you've never even read the Idylls, u fakeass phoney! And for your racist self I would recommend the ultra nationalist poetry of Radovan Karadgic. crabshack 01-17-2017, 12:27 AM It's kind of weird to assume that anybody else was attempting a haiku. There's not much challenge in succeeding. True. But even that doesn't even matter. RBG has this fucking dumb dummy read-one-time-in-a-book mentality that haiku ABSOLUTLEY MUST follow some 5-7-5 rule, but even people who don't know a fucking thing about haiku know that isn't true. This is like college writing class 101. So it's like, congratulations, you've won at being a dipshit who knows nothing. I mean it's like RBG is pretending to be a traditional sonnet master but he's never written a sonnet in his life so he doesn't realize that the old rules don't matter anymore. FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:28 AM Not u rbg, poots redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:28 AM the most intense paper I ever wrote in school was on Radovan Karadzic crabshack 01-17-2017, 12:29 AM I mean goddam even wiki says it's bullshit and doesn't translate. RBG is in his 20s and has an education from 40 years ago. redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:30 AM I see poots has logged into all his troll accounts tonight redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:33 AM it's like you can't decide if you want to be foolokatook, a troll, or a real person crabshack 01-17-2017, 12:36 AM typical deflection redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:37 AM did you have a bad day honey you seem tense redbreegull 01-17-2017, 12:37 AM let me rub your shoulders for you FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:38 AM I know he's stealing my ur mom thunder. You really wrote a paper on Karagic? You know among us sensible yugos he's probs considered the worst of all those murdering fuckers. Probably cos he was an intellectual who fueled that shit. The last years of his life living in hiding and disguised make good reading. What did your paper focus on? crabshack 01-17-2017, 12:39 AM these are not the boarders you are looking for crabshack 01-17-2017, 12:41 AM he eats his big shit because he's so fucking small in winter we die FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:45 AM That's ok but its not quite Below the Purple Waves is it now? No, it isn't. FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 12:56 AM Only a fool would have gone with logged on instead of logged in. redbreegull 01-17-2017, 01:02 AM there once was a netphorian fool who likely dropped out of high school he takes my flip pose as serious prose is he stupid or just some bored tool? FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 01:07 AM I'm a drop out... A DOCTORAL DROPOUT BITCH!!! GOD I AM AWESOME FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 01:08 AM Ok laku noc za sada vidimo se sutra ohnoitsbonnie 01-17-2017, 01:12 AM Laku noc ohnoitsbonnie 01-17-2017, 01:14 AM Slatki snovi crabshack 01-17-2017, 01:27 AM <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/QUvVdTlA23w" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> reprise85 01-17-2017, 02:07 AM I'm a drop out... A DOCTORAL DROPOUT BITCH!!! GOD I AM AWESOME you know colleges hate that shit. when i look at places i want to go they have like one drop out every few years (small programs with like 5-10 students per cohort). and they try to hide it like number graduated in 5 years, number graduated in 6 years, number graduated in 7 or more years, number not graduated and not currently enrolled - bitch please we know someone dropped out or got kicked out ohnoitsbonnie 01-17-2017, 05:34 AM Musa velutina FoolofaTook 01-17-2017, 11:37 AM I'm guessing most doctoral students fail. I know my dad was always freaking out about his phds. especially during the thesis period. i dropped out after two summer courses lol. run2pee 03-09-2017, 09:44 AM Well I'm going back down to jetblack city Lodging with a bluesman n band Gonna lose me some pounds Gonna get back pretty Catch me walkin flossed in copland But all I see is carpet moons, dusty blooms The emptiest rooms, and the powers almost out The stink eats dreams As lice loves beans Like ice needs teens Winter is your shivering dealer Roll us up a smoke it's been years since we spoke Composed 3 jokes and remembered 1 All those old friends can't stand to look at us now The bottoms scary but it sure is fun Smelly Satan will not look away: keep trying to meet me at the corner store Can never just stay but might come back as trees Keep hoping for that smorgasbord But all I see is carpet moons, dusty blooms The emptiest rooms, and the powers almost out The stink eats dreams As lice loves beans Like ice needs teens Winter is your shivering dealer The stink eats your dreams Winter is your shivering dealer reprise85 03-09-2017, 11:40 AM awesome! run2pee 03-09-2017, 01:04 PM awesome! Thanks, but it's hard for me to claim credit for this one, as it seemed to have been whispered, whole and intact, into my ear by a lonely spirit as I sat on my stoop in 2010, only six months removed from a narrowly averted alcoholic suicide, contemplating the street traffic and police, and whether I would even live to age 30 after all It seems to be about the short-lived euphoria experienced by the ultimately doomed addict who's Really Gonna Beat It This Time, gonna turn things around and everything When I can figure out how to upload it somewhere I'll post the recording of the song that goes to this, it's maybe kinda catchy in a sad, depressing way reprise85 03-09-2017, 01:12 PM i'd love to hear it. you have a unique writing style that i really like yo soy el mejor 03-09-2017, 04:39 PM sounds like a country song. i can help you figure out how to upload it somewhere. run2pee 03-09-2017, 04:53 PM Do people like the soundcloud? The bandcamp? I see them most often in the "post yur musics" thread Had a reverbnation at one point but F them, they're relentless spammers and seem to prey upon the pitiful dreams of the young and (marginally) talented buzzard 03-09-2017, 05:51 PM If laziness leads you to YouTube, we can surely find it in our hearts to forgive you. Trotskilicious 03-09-2017, 06:38 PM i wrote this myself Now I greet you from the other side of sorrow and despair, with a love so vast And so shattered, it will reach you everywhere. And I sing this for the captain whose ship has not been built, for the mother in Confusion, her cradle still unfilled. For the heart with no companion, for the soul without a king. for the prima Ballerina who cannot dance to anything. Through the days of shame that are coming, through the nights of wild distress, Though your promise count for nothing, you must keep it nonetheless. You must keep it for the captain whose ship has not been built. for the mother in Confusion her cradle still unfilled. For the heart with no companion, for the soul without a king, for the prima Ballerina who cannot dance to anything. run2pee 03-09-2017, 06:55 PM i wrote this myself Now I greet you from the other side of sorrow and despair, with a love so vast And so shattered, it will reach you everywhere. And I sing this for the captain whose ship has not been built, for the mother in Confusion, her cradle still unfilled. For the heart with no companion, for the soul without a king. for the prima Ballerina who cannot dance to anything. Through the days of shame that are coming, through the nights of wild distress, Though your promise count for nothing, you must keep it nonetheless. You must keep it for the captain whose ship has not been built. for the mother in Confusion her cradle still unfilled. For the heart with no companion, for the soul without a king, for the prima Ballerina who cannot dance to anything. That's kickass, conjure up mad images n colors in my headparts FoolofaTook 03-09-2017, 06:56 PM I didn't write this but I sure wish I did. Violent torture, Death has arrived, Armageddon, Terror and fright, Bleeding corpses, Rotting decay Anarchy, Violent torture, Antichrist, Lucifer, Son of Satan Pure Fucking Armageddon Pure Fucking Armageddon! FoolofaTook 03-09-2017, 08:24 PM Alchohol, alchohol: Puke your guts out in a stall, Smash your head into a wall, Dive into a savage brawl, Watch your step or you might fall, Into gutters there to crawl, With the worms who lost it all: Alchohol. :) (don't judge me) FoolofaTook 03-09-2017, 08:58 PM Thank you, brother. cork_soaker 03-28-2017, 04:51 PM not mine, but i came across it today and the author's name (somewhat disturbingly) reminded me of netphoria. it is quite a lovely poem Maps Yesenia Montilla Some maps have blue borders like the blue of your name or the tributary lacing of veins running through your father’s hands. & how the last time I saw you, you held me for so long I saw whole lifetimes flooding by me small tentacles reaching for both our faces. I wish maps would be without borders & that we belonged to no one & to everyone at once, what a world that would be. Or not a world maybe we would call it something more intrinsic like forgiving or something simplistic like river or dirt. & if I were to see you tomorrow & everyone you came from had disappeared I would weep with you & drown out any black lines that this earth allowed us to give it— because what is a map but a useless prison? We are all so lost & no naming of blank spaces can save us. & what is a map but the delusion of safety? The line drawn is always in the sand & folds on itself before we’re done making it. & that line, there, south of el rio, how it dares to cover up the bodies, as though we would forget who died there & for what? As if we could forget that if you spin a globe & stop it with your finger you’ll land it on top of someone living, someone who was not expecting to be crushed by thirst— FoolofaTook 03-28-2017, 06:02 PM Woah FoolofaTook 03-28-2017, 06:02 PM I.don't think that's the same Yesenia. FoolofaTook 03-28-2017, 06:02 PM Why were you disturbed? slunken 03-28-2017, 10:32 PM suck it why you be suckin it come on now this is getting ridiculous you crazy leave me alone The Omega Concern 03-28-2017, 10:48 PM a vibrational muse caresses your shoulder a universal truth the God-head as proof and it comes down whole in a moment or so that takes 20 minutes just to finish the notes and when you take a look at what's complete you say, "How the hell did that come out of me!?!" :netphoria cork_soaker 03-28-2017, 10:50 PM Why were you disturbed? reminded me of a hotel room i once stayed in |