Not at the moment. I'm going to start going to school for theater education soon though.
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 08:51 PM
Do you play baseball?
Nope
kelsome
06-23-2008, 08:54 PM
ah
MonteLDS
06-23-2008, 09:27 PM
lighting is my main concern here.. everything looks like crap at the start. I know lights can be expensive, but some good soft light would make it much easier to watch
I do LOVE the good straight cuts in the video from scene to scene.
the camera goes out of and in focus when the guy leaves the card table while on the phone
the card players scene thing really needs some serious audio adjustment. the background music was WAY too high. also when he is outside talking by the baseball field. all that wind was hard.
the script isn't too bad. but the story is kind of slow...
the amount of talent (actors / actress) that you had in the film was awesome.
Thanks for the feedback Monte, that's just what I needed. I've been noted on the sound issue before (I use a laptop, the audio can be deceiving even with headphones) and I'll look into lighting. This being my first film, constructive criticism works for the best... hopefully.
ravenguy2000
06-23-2008, 11:16 PM
brokengourds what is the best taco you ever had
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 11:17 PM
A friend of mine was telling me the other day that the lighting is probably because I was trying to set the levels on the camcorder itself instead of messing with the exposure during post-production.
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 11:17 PM
brokengourds what is the best taco you ever had
My wife's.
ravenguy2000
06-23-2008, 11:20 PM
is that some sort of sex joke? because if so i find it really inappropriate for this kind of board
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 11:21 PM
Oh, I apologize... someone else's wife I guess. I don't care who, I guess you can pick.
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 11:21 PM
I digress
duovamp
06-23-2008, 11:22 PM
Looks like you could learn a thing or two from Monte concerning etiquette.
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 11:28 PM
Oh, I'm just messing around.
Seriously... where would anyone else take that taco question without actually talking about tacos?
ravenguy2000
06-23-2008, 11:33 PM
Oh, I apologize... someone else's wife I guess.
your dad's wife's taco, aka your mom's. you are one sick fuck, how about you go break some gourds
BrokenGourds
06-23-2008, 11:40 PM
It's where I came out, and thus, I'm very grateful for it.
sppunk
06-24-2008, 08:26 AM
lighting is my main concern here.. everything looks like crap at the start. I know lights can be expensive, but some good soft light would make it much easier to watch
I do LOVE the good straight cuts in the video from scene to scene.
the camera goes out of and in focus when the guy leaves the card table while on the phone
the card players scene thing really needs some serious audio adjustment. the background music was WAY too high. also when he is outside talking by the baseball field. all that wind was hard.
the script isn't too bad. but the story is kind of slow...
the amount of talent (actors / actress) that you had in the film was awesome.
keep it up, and hope things get better!
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Nimrod's Son
06-24-2008, 01:12 PM
was this filmed in 1987 or just using technology and equipment from 1987
MonteLDS
06-24-2008, 01:22 PM
i don't think that's a fair assessment. the issue is lighting. along with poor audio.
otherwise this is a pretty typical home made project.
Debaser
06-24-2008, 02:09 PM
the lack of gorilla suits in this video is a concern
Caine Walker
06-24-2008, 02:12 PM
goddamn, it took that fucker forever to park his car, get his shit, and get out of there.
BrokenGourds
06-24-2008, 02:29 PM
was this filmed in 1987 or just using technology and equipment from 1987
I had to change the video format several times throughout production for it to work properly. My HDD camcorder sucks because the video format used on its drive isn't compatible with my video editing software. Then we take lighting into consideration, sound issues, and the fact it's a mediocre camcorder - and there you have it... 1987. I'd like to get some 35mm film, but you know... it's expensive as hell... so I'll stick with 1987 for the time being.
BrokenGourds
06-24-2008, 02:33 PM
goddamn, it took that fucker forever to park his car, get his shit, and get out of there.
Realistically, that's about how long it would take most people to do that. It just seems like it takes a long time because you are watching someone else have to do it. It'd feel a little rushed if he sped in there, grabbed his shit, and ran in the apartment. He's not running from anyone, and thus, wouldn't fit in.
Actually I'd say my biggest problem with it, production wise (aside from poor acting, which is expected) would be the editing. Almost every scene involves a few out of place jump cuts.
BrokenGourds
06-24-2008, 04:44 PM
Actually I'd say my biggest problem with it, production wise (aside from poor acting, which is expected) would be the editing. Almost every scene involves a few out of place jump cuts.
I was the only one in it with any acting experience, so I'm not going to argue with you on the acting portion. As for the out-of-place jump cuts, do you have any examples? It'll help me on later projects.